A haiku is an ancient form of japanese poetry which consists of three lines.
Read more about haiku on
http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
Here is my first attemt :)
Like raindrops on still water
My heart dips, ripples, resonates and imbibes
The sound of your laughter
7 comments:
Your haiku is too extravagant to my way of thinking!
Thanks varan for leaving your comments.
This is my first haiku so i dont know if i make my intentions clear.
What i am trying to say is
"The sound of your laughter has the same effect on my heart as the rain drop that falls on still water.
the sound of your laughter sinks, ripples, and gets absorbed in my heart for ever :)"
May i know why you feel its extravagent? It will surely help me understand your perspective and I will try to come up with a better one next time.
Hey dear...its too good...
so we are having a great poet along with us, y dont u try with sonnet also?
I loved it and actually u dont need to give any meaning as from ur haiku its quite evident...
too good yaar....
Can figure out the status of ur mind when writing the haiku :) now if u dont mind may I have the permission to ask whose laughter made ur heart dip, ripple and resonate at the same time ;)
Hi sourav,
you sure have the permission to ask me
" A baby's laughter " :-p
hey hii, nice ....really i enjoyed with your poems...thanks to you ...you made me happy i have red your poems its cool , i want be your friend its that ok.... ???
ಬೆಳದಿಂಗಳ ಕಂಡು
ನೈದಿಲೆಯು ನಾಚಿತು .........
ತಾರೆಗಳ ಹೊತ್ತ ಗಗನವ ಕಂಡು
ಬುವಿಯು ನಾಚಿತು .........
ಬೀಸುವ ತಂಗಾಳಿಯು
ಕುಸುಮದ ಪರಿಮಳವೆಲ್ಲ ತನ್ನದೆಂದಿತು ........
ಬೆಳಕು ಮರೆಯಾಗುತಿರಲು
ಜಗವೇ ತನ್ನದೆಂದಿತು ಇರುಳು ......................
ಪ್ರಕೃತಿಪ್ರಿಯ.........
ಪ್ರೀತಿಯ ಮನದಂಗಳದಲಿ
ಚಿಲುಮೆಯ ಕಾರಂಜಿಗಳ ನಡುವೆ
ಚೆಲ್ಲಿರುವ ಬೆಳದಿಂಗಳು ಚೆನ್ನ ಗೆಳತಿ
ನೆನಪಿನ ಸಾಗರದಲ್ಲಿ
ಆಗ ಆಗ ದಡಕ್ಕೆ ಅಪ್ಪಳಿಸುವ
ನೆನಪಿನ ಅಲೆಗಳು ಚೆನ್ನ ಗೆಳತಿ .........:)
ಪ್ರಕೃತಿಪ್ರಿಯ .......
Wow! Thats amazing soujanya :-)
Welcome to the club...would love to be your friend.....
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